I read an the article about a damage of alcohol for our bodies. All of us know that drinking too much alcohol is very harmful, it gives us hangovers, makes us feel tired and nervous. Moreover, research shows that a high alcohol intake can also damage our mental health, memory skills and reduce fertility. Also everyone knows that alcohol destroys the health by damaging the liver, heart and nervous system.
In fact, drinking alcohol is a kind of generally accepted social customs. People drink on every possible occasion: to celebrate a first job, a passed exam, a wedding day or the birth of a first child. From my point of view there is nothing wrong in drinking at parties or some ceremonies, but the problem is that many people do not know when to stop and they usually drink to much. In the conclusion I'd like to say that the less we drink the lower will be the risk to develop health problems.And as soon as we realize, that alcohol is dangerous for us, our society will be more heather.
I've found some mistakes in your post. First of all, you can't use two articles at the same time :"an the". Also, there are some other mistakes: read,drinking alcohol is a kind of generally accepted social customs (custom), drink to much (too). What is more, when you want to conclude your article,you should write it from another paragraph : "In the conclusion I'd like to say".
ОтветитьУдалитьOn the other hand, I totally agree with your opinion about the damage of alcohol:) You have to know when you must stop.
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